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if i dont get this assignment turned in tomorrow, it will be hard to get my grade back up. I'm having a little bit of trouble with this essay. Can someone turn this into a 500 word, 5 paragraph essay? help appreciated... Like the title, 2007 has been the worst year of my life. To start off doctors found a tumor on my moms liver so they scheduled surgery to remove it. It was the day after her birthday when they did it. When they took it out, they found out that she actually had lung cancer, and that it had spread out in one of her lungs, diaphragm, and then her liver. So they took it out. They caught it in time, and she went through about six months of chemo. Before she even finished chemo, she was on her way to pick me up from school, and she lost control of the car, and then rolled it, and landed on the top. Thanks to friend, family, and God, she made it through the accident and finished chemo, and now she is healthy and cancer-free. Also my dad had a heart attack a couple weeks before she finished chemo. He had a quintuple bypass, and then as soon as the doctor would let him. That also brought me closer to God because my dad did not feel good, but he felt that he needed to go to church that night anyway, and a couple guys that used to be doctors told him that he needed to go to the emergency room, and the major thing is that if he would not have gone he would have left the next morning on a trip to New Orleans to deliver a trailer for FEMA, and that he would have had a serious heart attack that would have more than likely killed him. He made it through that. A couple weeks ago, he got a new job at Beau Greer's mine, then he was working on a roof and he had set his ladder on a pile of wet, slippery micha, then he fell with the ladder twelve feet. He got a huge bruise on his chin, chipped four teeth, cracked two ribs, and busted (not cut) his legs and elbows open. He had to get stitches in his elbow. He is just now getting over that. And then, there is one last thing, my grandmother (I do not remember when) was diagnosed with Alzheimer's. I understand that nothing bad happened directly to me, but they are my family. I give all credit for their recovery to God. I know that without Him, things would be a lot worse, and that He probably used it to test our faith. My family is starting to get back up on our feet and getting caught back up financially, after all the medical bills, and we hope that 2008 will be a good year. if u cant help completely then, help make it longer

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1. err, this is way too much =S
2. This is what I would do if I were you...hope I help. Like the title, 2007 has been the worst year of my life. My close family members have endured several unpitying times. My mom and dad both became sick this year, and my dad also had a scary accident. My grandma also has taken sick this year. Because of my family's misfortune, this has not been a good year. My mom recently discovered she had a tumor. The day after her birthday, the doctors went in to remove it. Little did they know, they would find that cancer had spread to one of her lungs, her diaphragm, and her liver. Although the doctors were able to remove the cancer, my mom had to undergo six months of chemotherapy. Before she even finished chemo, she had another accident. On her way to pick me up from school she lost control of the car, rolled it, and landed upside down. Thanks to friends, family, and God, she made it through the accident and was able to finish chemo. Luckily my mom is now healthy and cancer-free. In addition to her troubles, my dad had a heart attack a few weeks before my mom finished chemotherapy. One night my dad felt that he needed to go to church. Some congregation members that were former doctors told him that he needed to go to the emergency room. Luckily he went to the doctor instead of leaving the next morning on his scheduled trip to New Orleans. He had to have a quintuple bypass surgery. To add to my dad's misfortune, he soon after had another accident. After getting a new job at a mine, he was working on a ladder. Little did he know, the ladder was set on a pile of wet, slipper micha. After falling twelve feet, he suffered bruising, four chipped teeth, two cracked ribs, and busted-open legs and elbows. Once again he had to visit the doctor for stitches. Lastly, my grandmother was diagnosed with Alzheimer's disease. This is a very grueling disease. Not only is it sad for my grandma, but also hard for the people who care about her. Because of my family's bad luck, I feel that 2007 was not a good year. I give all credit for their recovery to God. I know that without Him, things would be a lot worse, and that He probably used these trials to test our faith. My family is now started to get back up on our feet. We are also getting caught up financially after all the medical bills. Despite the past year, I am staying optimistic and hoping that 2008 will be a great year.