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What do u think the thesis is or can you help me write a good thesis Body Image Obsession Today‘s society is heavily focused on the physical aspect of our bodies. It is hard not to pay attention to the way we look. In the United States the value of being thin has been the predominant stereotype for women. The problem is that some women go the wrong way about obtaining that image and even go to the extent of hurting themselves to reach the ideal look. Cultural and media reinforce the belief that women should be more concerned with their appearance. Society plays a massive role in influencing our lives and our judgments. In western society the idea of having a perfect body type has become an obsession. Never in history has body image standards had so much impact on society. The solution to ending America’s obsession with thinness is a change in cultural attitudes. In every society, people use their appearance as a way to express their social relationships. American culture portrays certain morals and ideas that women feel they must live up to. The media plays a significant role in our cultural impressions about our bodies, most of our body insecurities are set on us by the media. Everything on it focuses on appearance. Women are under constant pressure to fit a certain idea of beauty. Seeing images of flawless, thin females makes it hard for us to feel good about our bodies. Teens compare themselves with images of models featured in magazines, and that may lead to negative feeling about their bodies. The negative effects about media advertisements not only include the pursuit of cosmetic surgery but it also includes a whole range of disordered eating habits. Eating disorders include extreme attitudes, emotions, and behaviors surrounding weight and food issues; they can be experienced by both men and women. Starvation diets, pill, juice drinks, and other rapid weight loss techniques are usually the starting point to eating disorders. The two most common types of eating disorders are Anorexia Nervosa and Bulimia Nervosa. Anorexia Nervosa is a psychiatric diagnosis that describes an eating disorder characterized by low body weight and body image distortion with an obsessive fear of gaining weight. Bulimia Nervosa is an eating disorder characterized by recurrent “purging”. The most common form practice of people with bulimia is self induced vomiting and the use of laxatives. Some factors that can contribute to eating disorders are low self-esteem, lack of control in life, depression, anxiety and strong need to please others. People with eating disorders see something entirely different when they look in the mirror. Eating disorders are most successfully treated when diagnosed early. People with eating disorder most of the time do not recognize or admit that they are ill; as a result they resist to getting or staying in treatment. Today’s society is heavily focused on the physical aspect of our bodies. There is no such thing as an “ideal” or “perfect” body. Trying to achieve the “perfect” female body image seen on TV and magazines is leading an increasing number of teens to develop eating disorders. Because of our society description of beauty, we are lead to thinks we are not pretty or sufficiently handsome. Women need to stop allowing themselves to feed into what society considers an acceptable appearance and start becoming what they were meant to look like.
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